New adoptable? Critique/Comment

[Wildfilly94]

Female
Male

I plan to get them cleaned up so they dont look like their on paper, which.. they are, Inked, Shaded, Templated, all that jazz.

The Male was drawn by my friend Cassidy, RL friend who gave me permission to do as I please with, so I re-vamped him so only his body outline looks liek what she drew, and I drew the female myself. I'm eventually going to draw babies, or be lazy and draw eggs or something of the sort.

Honest Opinions/Comments/Advice?

[Kahlira]

I would stalk these. The only thing is the male's left eye seems a bit off.

[Wildfilly94]

Thanks. and yeah, i couldnt get them to look right, so i left them how cassidy drew them. Lol.